Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Invention of the TV was one of the biggest innovations of the 20th century, if not of the entire history of the technologies. It not only changed the total entertainment segment, it also developed the cinematic world and the created the new way of getting information. Even though television has undoubtable benefits, some people claim, that the television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Obviously, this opinion has its point. However, I personally disagree with this statement for the reasons I will try to explain in the following essay.
First of all, television is giving a lot of information and topics, that people discuss in their daily basis. TV shows, political debates, news, talk shows and plenty other programs that we talk about every day, and without which our communication would be shorter or colorless. For instance, year ago the channel HBO has realized the last season of the famous tv show game of thrones. People all over the world were debating about the end of the world’s most popular series. Even me and my family members would go to the café and watch new episodes together, and after that we would spend hours talking about the plot twists and moves made by the director.
The second reason, is that the television is just an another way of entertainment, which existed centuries before the invention of the TV. People had books, theater, art and sports, which was another way to isolate the person from the social world and reduce communication with family members or friends. The only way person could look at the routine of the person, who was living in the 19th century or earlier are books. By reading them I saw that even before tv , women would spend their time by creating new clothes or cooking, and men would learn the art of the war.
In a nutshell, I think that even though television has its disadvantages, it has nothing to do with the communication between friends and family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a way' or 'another way'.
Suggestion: a way; another way
... reason, is that the television is just an another way of entertainment, which existed centuri...
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Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y reading them I saw that even before tv , women would spend their time by creatin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, second, so, for instance, i think, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88855421687 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67149483106 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3857851768 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.2 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170874694226 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567460110226 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718344606572 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122194490238 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768871389521 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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