It is undeniably true that happiness depends on the peoples’ perspective and the life they are leading. While a significant majority of experts are of the opinion that teenagers are enjoying the most, few are stating masses in adulthood having more fun. In my opinion, I believe the prior group would enjoy their life compared to the latter.
On one hand, sociologists are claiming that people who are in mid-teens are the most satisfying and happy because of a plethora of reasons. The first point worth mentioning is related to having fewer responsibilities. To elaborate on this, in this age period, children generally tend to either study their subjects or enjoy playing games or going movies with their loved ones. The second point to be highlighted is that associates with spending time with their family. During this time, they would have more time and they spend quality time with family, taking their guidance for their carrier. Despite the fact that they may face some of the metal problems including stress, and depression because of their study curriculum, overall, they would have more chances to enjoy this period.
On the other hand, as per experts, in spite of mid-aged persons earn more, leads a life in their own style, and lives independently, these are not happiest souls as compared to the adolescents because of bringing up kids, other crucial priorities. Firstly, men or women look after their offspring and this includes not only their studies but also has to take care of their health which leaves them a smaller number of hours to make themselves happy. In addition to that, working professionals have to work on a regular basis for earning a sufficient amount of money to lead a sophisticated lifestyle, and this makes them materialist, which again causes them to be unhappy.
To conclude, as have been saying in the previous paragraphs, I think, though the elder generation might be earning and leading a life that they want, youngsters would enjoy most because of fewer tasks.
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- Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver When you arrived home you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane Write a letter to the airline In your letter you should explain where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks lik 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...er. Despite the fact that they may face some of the metal problems including stress, and de...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the happiest'.
Suggestion: not the happiest
...yle, and lives independently, these are not happiest souls as compared to the adolescents be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, so, while, as to, i think, in addition, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00892857143 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65285104997 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58630952381 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2586632117 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.461538462 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164279542401 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622599871222 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058220939972 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103802367528 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361360913996 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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