It is important to know about the happening of the world
It goes without saying that in this sophisticated and progressive era in which we are living, university students should be equipped with vast amount of knowledge and information about assortments of issues; history is not an exception. While many practitioners and curriculum policy makers believe that all of the students should be required to take history course, others stand at the other end of the continuum, believing that taking history course which is irrelevant to students' field of study is unnecessary and extremely ineffective. As far as I am concerned, I hold the opinion that taking history course regardless of students' field of study should be must and a priority in universities. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, taking history course will open an avenue for students to be endowed with the most important and educational experiences of the past generations. It is crystal clear that the more knowledge people have about the ebbs and flows of their predecessors, the more insight will be sparked on their mentality. Being dependent on histories of inter-or intra communities will open the windows of wisdom and enlightment for students thanks to the experience gained form the prior history. Undeniably, being aware of the failure and prosper of some of the historical event will broaden students understanding and knowledge; events such as Iran or France revolutions are just two examples.
Furthermore, having a good command of history course will empower students to become familiar with different cultures all around the world. To put it in other words, when students read the historical event of various countries or different eras, they will understand their cultures as well. It can be mentioned that history and cultures are inseparable. If students dig down the history pertain to a particular country, they will understand their cultural value as well.
Last but not least, to read and study a history course means to become acquainted with the process of failure or flourish of a society. It is undisputable that the course of flourishing and prospering of a society can be reflected through the history of that era. If students read the history related to that country, they will become familiar and will understand the reasons, policies, actions, attitudes of previous leaders. Moreover, they can understand how the previous generation have faced different challenges.
In conclusion, having the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I do believe that it is important for university students to take history course. Not only do students gain knowledge and experience about the previous generation, but also they can become familiar with the cultures of their predecessors. What is more, they can envision the process of their failure and prosper to know the steps taken to resolve the challenges.
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2440.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29284164859 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94604639317 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475054229935 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 759.6 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5352939735 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.421052632 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2631578947 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0607844239621 0.236089414692 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0205904515412 0.076458572812 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271799135557 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0396420235164 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369753737521 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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