Some high schools have a requirement that students must complete a certain amount of volunteer work in order to graduate. What do you think about this type of requirement? Give details to support your opinion.
These days, volunteer works are not certainly unfamiliar with students. Even completing an amount of volunteer work also become criteria for students' graduation. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this.
Firstly, it proves that students doing volunteer work can have essentials skills and practical knowledge for their future lives. This is because volunteer work requires important social knowledge and skills such as transferable skills, interpersonal skills, teamwork, and fast reflective skills. As a result, students meeting this requirement will gain a certain amount of knowledge and have a tremendous number of experiences and skills, which are much of the essence for their future.
Secondly, it also shows that these students have the ability to contribute to the development of their countries and societies. Almost all volunteer work is related to resolving social problems like unemployment, crimes, gender inequalities, ...etc. Thus, participating in and accomplishing those shows that students have concerned and had capabilities of giving solutions and improvements to bad social problems.
From all that I have mentioned before, it seems to be accepted that considering the accomplishment of volunteer works to some extent as a must requirement for students to graduate should be applied largely because of its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, thus, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6815920398 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08391904391 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606965174129 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7699730333 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.2 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305144029671 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11447322232 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453576758315 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174914582125 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417447069886 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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