You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club.
Write a letter to the manager of the golf club.
In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
tell him/her when you could start
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring to your attention that I am searching for a temporary freelance work at your prestigious country club.
My name is Elizabeth Manickam, born and brought up in a beautiful place named the Nilgiris in South India. I was privileged enough to get an opportunity to study arts in sports management and hold a bachelor’s degree in it.
I have three years of hands-on practice in this field, besides that, I am an active listener as well as someone who is good at teamwork and decision making. In addition to this I expertise in being good at time management.
I am extremely passionate to commence my duty as soon as possible once you confirm my job as well as I would like to inform you that I prefer to work from 4 pm to 8 pm at weekdays and full time on weekends.
I would be delightedly grateful to you if you would consider me for this position and give me an opportunity to work at your esteemed institution.
Yours Faithfully,
Elizabeth Manickam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 185, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... work from 4 pm to 8 pm at weekdays and full time on weekends. I would be delightedly...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to work at your esteemed institution. Yours Faithfully, Elizabeth Manickam. ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64640883978 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88952917178 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618784530387 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5340231923 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.125 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205414386238 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754150344181 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599344663606 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106249281964 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613763641947 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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