More and more people now own cars. What are the problems associated with an increase in the usage of private cars? How can these problems be solved?
It is concerned that today, personal means of transportation are increasing exponentially. It is commonly believed that there are a number of obstacles surrounding this phenomenon and it can be resolved through adequate measures of the governments and individuals.
Generally speaking, there are a plethora of problems in relation to raising private transport. On the one hand, there is air pollution due to exhaust emissions and greenhouse gases, which elevate carbon dioxide rates in the atmosphere. On the other hand, it raises the temperature which is the majority reason for global warming. As a consequence, by these effects, people would suffer from various type of lung diseases, and icebergs in the polar areas would be melted by increasing heatwaves worldwide. Take South Korea as an example, many people have difficulties from lung cancer since the air has contaminated by car emissions, and this four seasons nation has become a subtropical area where is humid and hot in the summertime.
In an attempt to tackle these problems, some measures can be put in by the governments and individuals. First and foremost, governments should offer concessions for utilising public transportation, it can be an effective way in which the aforementioned issues can be resolved because the public would be attracted to taking buses and subways for means of transport if there are benefits for them. As an excellent illustration is that Australia provides free transit in public holidays so that residents do not prefer driving their own cars in those days, which to reduce carbon dioxides. On top of that, governments should extend more public transit since it would encourage people to travel by public transport. Last but not least, broadcasting campaigns is not only an influential method to educate citizens but also it gives people to confront their negligence.
In conclusion, it can be observed that there are several negatives by increasing number of owing cars; however, with the right actions, it can be resolved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27160493827 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02365817577 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570987654321 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6358658606 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.384615385 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24689112117 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742189293702 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435318545244 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129983186284 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400484019744 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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