Some people prefer to raise children in the cities while others believe that children should be raised in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinio
A School of thought thinks that juveniles should be nurtured in the urban environment rather than in the rural areas. I personally opine that children should be raised in metropolitan cities for numerous reasons which shall be discussed in the below paragraphs.
To begin with, prompt care should be given to the children while building up their base. Also, whatever they have learned in their upbringing, this information remains in their mind for a long time. So, this can only be done by caretaking them in the urban areas which are fully equipped with infrastructure and a myriad of facilities. For instance, if a child got ill then the accurate medication can be provided by the professional doctors and with the availability of rapid transport any urgency for an ill toddler can be met within time. Therefore, young minds should be treated and grown up in the cities in regards to health.
On the other hand, when children are raised in the urban areas they are away from a polluted environment. The countrysides contains fresh air and pure water. Furthermore, if children are grown up within an amiable surrounding it makes the mindset strong and healthy. However, these areas are far from the urban areas so the basic needs of the children such as regular checkups, buying essential things and high education could only be fulfilled in the urban areas in spite of having clean environment.
To sum up, despite the benefits of the upbringing of children in the natural environment owing to less contaminated society, it is vehemently suggested that infants should be nurtured in the large cities where all the facilities and services are provided to them within a short time and distance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...d be treated and grown up in the cities in regards to health. On the other hand, when chi...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'contain'.
Suggestion: contain
... polluted environment. The countrysides contains fresh air and pure water. Furthermore, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, such as, in spite of, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98245614035 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75934518352 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571929824561 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3219359166 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239406192619 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933192328339 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765796146183 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150442871091 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541365151496 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.