Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are the possible solutions?
Undoubtedly, the earth’s climate has gone through a tremendous shift since the beginning of the twenty-first century all thanks to human’s increasing intervention with the mother nature. As seawater level is rising ceaselessly, the issue of global warming has to be sent forward to get immediate attention. This essay will talk about two major problems of this phenomenon and suggests decreasing carbon footprint as well as investing in green energy as the most viable solutions.
Western disturbance and destruction of coastal areas, to begin with, are two major by-products of increased earth’s temperature. The reason behind the former issue is the decreased salt content in the sea, which creates distortion in seasonal wind pattern. As a result, countries suffer from natural calamities such as droughts and floods. Also, increased sea level poses a threat because the coastal areas might get submerged with this increased level. The Bahamas, for instance, is at the brink of submergence since the pacific sea is expanding continuously. Apparently, these obstacles if left untreated have the potential to wipe out the human race.
Even though these problems seem intractable, certain solutions are present. Firstly, in order to stop global warming, we have to curb our carbon footprint. By doing so, the environment will have fewer contaminants that will slow down this surge in temperature. Secondly, investing in an alternate source of energy is another feasible solution to combat this issue. Instead of non-renewable sources, humans have to prefer renewable sources with the help of which less pollution will occur that clearly means less chances of climatic destruction. For example, solar cars should be used in place of petrol cars that will not only save the environment but are also more affordable. Hence, these solutions can lessen the effects of global warming in the long run.
In conclusion, although global warming results in massive climatic problems, simple steps are available to tackle such issues. It depends upon humans whether they want to solve them or become a victim of a natural disaster.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 508, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...pollution will occur that clearly means less chances of climatic destruction. For ex...
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Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... become a victim of a natural disaster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37910447761 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81195931166 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644776119403 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4555629359 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.111111111 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204807509413 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550302041021 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399714506963 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112439712254 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338483586042 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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