Some think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.Discuss both sides and give your opinion
While it is believed by some that environmental issues ought to be resolved internationally, others argue that it is best managed locally. This essay will discuss both views before a reasoned conclusion is reached.
On the one hand,people who think that problems of the environment should be managed globally cited several reasons. First and foremost, international support is needed as they have better equipments. In other words,most underdeveloped countries faces myriad of environmental crises such as flooding, fire outbreaks,war and pollution and this have lead to lost of lives and properties. for example,in northern Nigeria,many physically displaced due to tourist insurgency and this cannot be managed locally.so seeking international intervention is the only solution. Another reason is that most countries are not financially capable to curb their problems and leads world-wide assistance.
On the other hand, every country should be able to manage it's problems as it arise since it is majorly caused by individuals. This is because when they are actively involved to provide solution in situations,they are able to prevent reoccurrance of such manage. For instance,in Nigeria, flooding in most of the country are caused by blockage of drainage system. So involving the locals to clear drains during dry season would prevent such problem in rainy season.
Personally,I believe it is important for every society to device a means to manage environmental problems as it is basically caused by the citizens.
In Conclusion, although people believe that international support is required to solve crises arising from the environment,it is better managed locally to avoid reoccurrance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63424124514 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23821916757 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8786557232 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207324067543 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716129988521 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612834474678 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119695563534 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476570385931 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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