Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.
To what extent do you agree or
It is often argued that smoking is both harmful to the smoker and the passerby and it oughta to be banned in public places. I strongly agree that smoking should be banned entirely.
First and foremost, smoking is detrimental to health. This is because it contains a chemical substance, nicotine which is found to damage the human organ system when it is inhaled as smoke. For instance, studies in the UK by medical researchers on causes of lung cancers, diabetes and hypertension had been linked to smoking.There is no doubt that smoking is the leading cause of death in both smoker and the near-by individual who breath it in as sir.
Secondly, smoking among young age group had lead to increase in criminal activities. In other words, youths now believe smoking is a way of life and this makes them feel they are matured and should take up certain decisions. As a result, they indulge themselves into robbery in ordered to get money to smoke and attain a level of satisfaction at that moment. Furthermore, smokers had been found to be malnourished asthey lack vital nutrients in their body and they do not eat balanced diet rather they spend their little money on smoking.
In Conclusion, there are strong argument on why smoking should be banned and I think this is best in order to have a healthy nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 325, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...hypertension had been linked to smoking.There is no doubt that smoking is the leading...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, for instance, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74672489083 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60986360488 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620087336245 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8898954914 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.7 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300985999823 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130557426033 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944759182125 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204052548608 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112152185097 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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