Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's world,daycare facilities is becoming popular. Even many schools now offer childcare services. While it is argued by some career parents that it is a better place to keep pre-school children, others think relatives offers best care. Both argument will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
On the one hand, many working parents choose their grandparents as caregiver because of cost. In other words, most of them manage their little income and spending on daycare services would mean more financial burden on them. For example, a 2019 study in Cambridge University showed that 80% of career parents keep their you children with their grandparents. As a result,it enable them to save more we money to buy other expenses.
In addition, they believe that their children is safe under the care of the people they trust. This is because,many couples who hire nannies have experienced a case of kidnap and this have discouraged them handling over their child to under unfamiliar individuals.
On the other hand, supporters of this argument cited several reasons.firstly, it allows children to be independent and competitive.
This is because they try to solve their given task alone In order to earn good scores. For instance, children who start school at a young age do better than those that starts later. Secondly, pre-school children in childcare centre develop their social skills. Therefore, they learn to relate and communicate with other children from different background. As a result, they grow to have better communication skill.than those who are cared for by family members.
In conclusion, both arguments have valid points. I personally agree that pre-school age ought to attend daycare in order for them to be independent and competitive as it will help them in the job market later on in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19528619529 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81207880175 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602693602694 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7012042726 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7222222222 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94444444444 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345626576841 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958399444848 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716368713199 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152248372216 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707396156869 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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