Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think the family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While it is believed by some individuals that daycare centers provide the necessary care for pre-school children, others argue that family members act as a better caregiver for them. I agree that crench is the best place for underaged children.
On the one hand, most working parents prefer their toddlers to be cared for by family members such as grandparents due to several reasons. Firstly,it is a cheaper method. In other words, most childcare centres are expensive nowadays,so using a family member helps to reduce expenses and such money can be used for other needs. In addition, parents feels the home is the safest environment for their children as they are under the watchful eyes of their grandparents.
On the other hand, childcare centre provide the opportunity for young children to have a feel of school environment. This is because they are taught some nursery rhymes and poems which help their communication skills. Moreso, they get to make new friends which enhance their social skills. Also, most of the caregiver in daycare are professionally trained to care for younger children. For instance, in canada working parents are advised to keep their younger children in French, as studies have shown that this helps to improve their acedemic performance when they are older.i believe,childcare centre offers the best care for pre-school children.
In Conclusion, the use of daycare centre is often debatable.i think that childcare centre provide better care for younger children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24583333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75627755718 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545833333333 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1943582603 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.916666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493494157222 0.244688304435 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178660532262 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106354401939 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312456076036 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016585436558 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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