Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children
The difference between the child care given by childcare centres or grandparents, which was always a debatable issue has now become more controversial with many people claiming that childcare homes are better while others reject this notion and back the idea of keeping them home with their grandparents. The substantial influence of urbanization has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In the coming paragraphs, I would like to ponder upon both before giving my verdict on the same.
Though there are many benefits of childcare centers one can go on to list. I will concentrate on the ones that are the most important ones. First, these childcare centers are highly reputed private organizations that hire trained staff to take proper care of infants every day and even during emergency hours like a child getting hurt or sick. Whereas grandparents owing to their old age, cannot give constant attention. Second, children are at a secure place where they face no danger from the outside world. What's more, toddlers are not likely to sit at a place. Therefore, daycares are the perfect place where toddlers can play with other toddlers or can indulge in brainstorming activities.
On the other hand, some people support the idea of keeping children home with grandparents. They say that grandparents provide love and warmth. In addition to this, they help to inculcate emotional intelligence in infants as well. Which is not possible at the daycares. Furthermore, chances of homesickness also get reduced when children stay at their homes with their family members.
Besides this, living at home with grandparents would also be beneficial for their health as grandparents provide food rich in nutritious value.
To recapitulate, I feel that both have their own benefits and drawbacks. In my opinion, grandparents can provide more love and support whereas childcare centers can provide more care and activities. But, looking at the present scenario, I assert that daycares are more beneficial.
- Your office building does not have parking available Write a letter to the manager In your letter explain the problem suggest a solution say why parking would benefit all employees 75
- You recently visited a theatre and had an accident there The staff were very helpful Write a letter to the manager giving good feedback In your letter you should tell and describe the accident how the staff helped you how similar situations could be preve 87
- Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers while others believe that the attitude of the student is more important Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff In your letter you should say the problem is due to lack of cafeteria how you and your colleagues feel about it what suggestions do you have 73
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child Write a letter to the parents In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 512, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h before giving my verdict on the same. Though there are many benefits of childcare ce...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 510, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
... face no danger from the outside world. Whats more, toddlers are not likely to sit at...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tional intelligence in infants as well. Which is not possible at the daycares. Furthe...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, i feel, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24691358025 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81968389788 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.7344075553 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4736842105 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0526315789 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168036191128 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454287745421 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421722439885 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980192968872 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274405616649 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.