the maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
The three maps indicate the information about, the modification, which have taken place at the Queen Mary Hospital until its erection in the years 1960, 1980 and 2000.
To embark with, there was a main road at the South. In 1960, the were four buildings : Shopping Centre at southern east; Hospital at southern West; Farmland at northern east and Car park at the norther west. Some changes were taken at thet place in the year 1980, two structures were removed : the shopping centre and farmland instead of those buildings Cancer Centre; pharmacy and nursing Institute were constructed, the shopping centre divided in cancer Centre and pharmacy. Nursing School from farmland. The car park and Hospital were as it is.
In addition, in the year 2000, the hospital and pharmacy at same position but the size of car park and Nursing School decline by half of the size and the Cancer Centre had been reconstructed big in a size, which covered the place of nursing Institute.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...structed, the shopping centre divided in cancer Centre and pharmacy. Nursing Scho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90303030303 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4605605762 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.668159338 43.030603864 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25464988731 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116291844362 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122037645969 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205447760169 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139924277342 0.0819641961636 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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