In the past, when students did a University degree, they tended to study in their own country.
Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
In this educational era, education is the key to unlock the golden door of career. In the past, learners tended to study in their own nation, while, they were pursuing the university degree. Presently, they have more opportunities to study in foreign countries. In this essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of this development.
On one hand, it is sine-qua-non for all the people to be an educated in order to obtain a good job for earning money. Few decades ago students preferred to do university degree in their own country but, nowadays, it is in a trend to get university degree from other nation. There are a multitude of advantages of studying in an overseas : receive a chance to settle in abroad; learn customs and culture of another country; not only that but also some educational Institutes provide free education and high qualified degree for free. For an example, one of the european countries - Germany, where most of the universities, which are authorised by the government, give higher education for free (without any kind of tuition fees) and scholarship to learners, who are clever also the chance of doing part time job while studying to incur daily expenses, these are the elements, which fascinate the youngsters to study in an overseas.
On the other hand, most of the pupils have a dream of getting educational qualification from other nations, where currency is higher compared to their own country, it has a some drawbacks : too expensive; fee structure is very high; unknown people; gibbrish language and extreme level of pressure or stress of work. For an instance, when students go abroad for studying, they have to do everything by themselves such as personal work, study, job and so on, accordingly, they feel mentally burden and do not concentrate upon study.
To conclude, one of the biggest advantage of learning in an overseas is that, receive a chance to settle in that country, high level of degree and many more, however, it has a few disadvantages like very expensive, different education system, high pressure and difficulties in conversation with locals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 796, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...who are clever also the chance of doing part time job while studying to incur daily expen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, while, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99715099715 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84905456968 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57264957265 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.619663988 49.4020404114 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.454545455 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.9090909091 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292280830956 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122549193997 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104078182096 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176620266926 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106518956874 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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