The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give the solution?
Governments are responsible for the problems of the people. But they are facing many serious challenges in these times. One of the life-threatening problem, the governments need to solve is clean drinking water. This essay will discuss how important it is to consider this issue and how to solve it.
To begin with, the humans cannot live without clean drinking water. It is pertinent that human body receives clean water in order to function properly as unclean water can lead to many chronic diseases such as hepatitis and kidney failures. For instance, the number of deaths due to water-borne diseases is highest in Africa because it has the lowest quality of water available for drinking. Therefore, clean water is essential for the survival of humans.
There are different solutions for this issue but investment in the water treatment plants is the most effective. Previously, ground water was considered to be the cleanest but now it is also contaminated and it requires to be treated. Once water is treated, it is safe to supply to the people and it reduces the diseases. For instance, in Islamabad a sudden reduction in water borne diseases were observed after the establishment of several treatment plants in the city. Thus, investing in construction of the treatment plant is the best solution.
In conclusion, availability of the clean water should be the first priority of the governments or other organisations and one of the effective methods is to build water treatment plants. In my opinion, the success of any government can be judged by seeing their seriousness to provide clean water to its citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09701492537 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89210638627 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6445841684 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0666666667 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100169018825 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465862598001 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568174251845 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698090509119 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426722527947 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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