In many countries people are spending more hours at their workplace. Why is that? Is that negative and positive development?
People nowadays become more workaholic by spending more time at workplace than at home. It can be explain by finance problems, savings, etc. Some people say that it is a good thing to working hard for their goals. Others claims the opposite matter that we should work less and take care of themselves. From my point of view, people have their own reasons for working hard so this essay will clarify the benefits and drawbacks of this statement.
On the one hand, people are hardworking because they are in the race of success which rates by salary and attitude in their job. People are forced to work for extra hours due to there are many competitors who are waiting for one job position. The owners of the companies will compare their productivity with each other to make decision to promote them or keep them stay in same place or even worse is firing them out of companies. People will start working over the task they have received to prove themselves worth for the higher position. Additionally, people some time work with their high passion, they love their job and working for the perfection of their products. For example, a designer always wants their design be the best, not only for selections of customers but also the taste of art which he really likes to show.
On the other hand, there are some negative perspective to that working overtime. Firstly, their relationship between people and their friends, partners and even between family members will be erased day by day. The interaction with other people will decrease due to people spend most of their time to focus on assignment they have been given. Secondly, people will have forgotten to look after themselves. Their health, consciousness and appearance would be effected. For instance, some researches show that more proportion of people have been stress due to the pressure come from workplace.
In conclusion, more and more people try to work overtime. Although some positive aspects it could bring such as salary, position and please their ego, working excessively will affect many sides of people lives and people should balance the work time and relaxing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91966759003 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44337974697 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548476454294 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2205658096 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4736842105 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273828003704 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907273184852 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739549674408 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184204919837 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343177106953 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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