The tourism industry has grown enormously over last 50 year, and there are few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the last 50 years, different touring companies has grown all over the world due to high demand and tourism has become the main income source of many countries. Though, this is not true everywhere.
In old times, tourism only meant by visiting some relative or going to some distant temple for spiritual purpose but nowadays people are becoming wealthy and so the idea of tourism is also changed. Now people do camping, or visit another country just for fun. Whatsoever, it has become more easy to visit country when their currency is lower. Countries like Cambodia get their main income from farming and tourists. There are many nations in Europe for which tourism plays crucial role in their economy. Tourism gives business to many people and it also help preserving our culture while welcoming foreign culture at the same time.
Some may say, tourism is just a seasonal income source and those families starve remaining year but that’s not true. Tourism also gives them many ideas for the business to work on. Nearly all countries charge extra money to foreign tourist and that money goes to improvement of the place so it is wrong to say that tourism rarely benefits the country. Although, if country’s policy is not working for tourism, it will never give good returns.
In the end I want to say that, tourism not only helps in growing nation’s economy but it also helps in uniting world and sharing cultures. If the individual country take the proper care of their tourist places and develop them, every country can earn a major amount of the share of their economy from tourism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e main income source of many countries. Though, this is not true everywhere. In old ...
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Line 2, column 555, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ves business to many people and it also help preserving our culture while welcoming ...
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Line 2, column 560, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to preserve' or 'preserve'.
Suggestion: to preserve; preserve
...usiness to many people and it also help preserving our culture while welcoming foreign cul...
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Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f their tourist places and develop them, every country can earn a major amount of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84306569343 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26324753692 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602189781022 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8925242345 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262662492209 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847286921878 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046338231971 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152822713862 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250005709212 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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