The line graph indicates the proportion of UK population owning car between 1975 and 2005
Overall, it is obvious that while the number of people owning 2,3 cars witnessed upward trends,the opposite was observed for people who owned no car
According to data, in 1975,the household using 1 car was highest percentage which stood at 45% while the figure for those using no car was slight lower ,about 43%.Beside,people owning 2,3 cars accounted for a smaller share . However ,over the following 10 years, a significant decrease of 10% was seen in UK population owning 1 car and 20 % in owning no car .But there was a minimal rise in the people using 2 cars (10%) and 3 cars (3%).
In the next 20 years, it is noticeable that the people who owned 1 car still first ranked with unchanged percent. In contrast ,the proportion of UK household having no car continued to gradual decrease and hit the lowest point approximately 23% while the opposite was true for that of owning 2,3 cars in the end of period at around 8% and 18% respectively
- More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplaces Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families but others think it will bring stress to the home Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005 percentage 66
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... owning 2,3 cars witnessed upward trends,the opposite was observed for people who ow...
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Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
...data, in 1975,the household using 1 car was highest percentage which stood at 45% while the...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... for those using no car was slight lower ,about 43%.Beside,people owning 2,3 cars ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Beside
...sing no car was slight lower ,about 43%.Beside,people owning 2,3 cars accounted for a ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...o car was slight lower ,about 43%.Beside,people owning 2,3 cars accounted for a smaller...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...g 2,3 cars accounted for a smaller share . However ,over the following 10 years, a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pulation owning 1 car and 20 % in owning no car .But there was a minimal rise in ...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... owning 1 car and 20 % in owning no car .But there was a minimal rise in the peop...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
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Line 4, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nked with unchanged percent. In contrast ,the proportion of UK household having no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, still, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65573770492 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71286737219 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.996123973 43.030603864 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.0 112.824112599 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.75 22.9334400587 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.23603664747 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182457284762 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109388693114 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551185353404 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133376455988 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608124086799 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.2329268293 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.