Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Experts throughout both the developing and developed countries have debated whether physical abilities are more relevant to progress in sports such as running, basketball, lawn tennis etc when compared to mental stability. In my opinion, I think physical strength helps to move the body, and surmount endless barriers. This essay will discuss both views using examples from a possible scenario and The Times newspaper to demonstrate points and prove arguments.
On the one hand, there is almost daily evidence that a stable physical state enables one to successfully perform various tasks, and I agree. In other words, no matter how tasking and enervating sporting activities may be, people with immeasurable physical vigor tend to move even faster than the imagined. Olympic swimmers, for example, consume appreciable quantity of glucose in order to acquire enough strength needed to successfully display their acrobatic skills. Therefore, sports involving great agility is rarely achievable even with a stable mental state.
On the other hand, it is sometimes thought that mental strength is necessary to attain success in sports because perseverance is a state of mind. People are encouraged more when they persevere and determine within themselves that they are capable. Another reason why mental stability is relevant is because it helps to remove any fear that may arise. Having to compete with skillful opponents alone results in increased tension and fear, which requires someone with a stable mindset to overcome. A recent article published by The Times newspapers revealed that during training, coaches encourage athletes to imagine and consider themselves a winning team prior to the actual day of their competition in order to suppress all fears.
In conclusion, while people may have various viewpoints, I think that people with great energy perform excellently well in sports than those with mental strength.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48322147651 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68698716121 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630872483221 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7198109607 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.692307692 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29110731944 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907263350327 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714268787659 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176659917055 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534686209841 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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