The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates the average monthly temperature and precipitation of rainfall in Kolkata's city in a year.
Overall, it is noticeable that the number of degrees in the city of Kolkata rose for the first 5 months before decreasing slightly several months later to the initial temperature in December. Furthermore, 4 months from June to September had an larger amount of rainfall compared to other months of the year. Conversely, December ranked last in the amount of precipitation and temperature degree.
As can be seen obviously, the average temperature of Kolkata's city in the first month of the year was 20oC, which was the lowest one in comparison to other months'. Then, it started rising at a peak of more than 10oC for the next 5 months, at over 30oC in May. The temperature degrees then dropped slightly at about 10oC each month from May to August, kept instant for the month after that and decreased sharply again in the last 3 months before stopping at approximate 20oC in December.
Furthermore, the quantity of rainfall that year had an inconsistent changes. It started at about 25mm in January before increasing significantly at an amount of 325 mm in 7 months, at nearly 350mm of rainfall in July, which was the highest amount of precipitation of the year. After that, it started going down insignificantly until September, and in October, the quantity of rain water dropped as half of an amount of that as in the previous month. It continued declining over 1/3 of that of the month before in November and didn't change in December, at nearly 25mm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...re, 4 months from June to September had an larger amount of rainfall compared to o...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
... rainfall that year had an inconsistent changes. It started at about 25mm in January be...
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Line 7, column 527, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...hat of the month before in November and didnt change in December, at nearly 25mm.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 33.7804878049 186% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87686567164 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86606758381 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481343283582 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5638371733 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.818181818 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197227307674 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897783885695 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597686697145 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156468185081 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549835347164 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.