A nation should require all its students to study same curiculum until they enter college
Students are often considered as the future of the nation. Each student should have a bare minimum amount of knowledge in every subject so that they are capable to choose the subject in which they want to pursue further. The prompt suggests that a nation should require all the students to study the same curriculum until they enter college.There will be few who will oppose to this recommendation but in my opinion, I mostly agree with the prompt till a considerable extent due to the following reasons.
Firstly, Students are required not only to develop skills in the core stream but also needs to learn a plethora of subjects. The gist of every subject allows the student to choose their interest which eventually helps students to choose their career. For example, a student in school studies english as the primary language and the other student studies mandarin as the primary one, this will lead to laconic personality for the students who are in minority as they cannot communicate in other language. Also, If the same curriculum is not followed throughout the country then students might not indulge in the profession which they haven't been introduced in the school. Hence, the above example supports the author's recommendation and bolsters his position.
Additionally, consider a scenario where a student has to shift the school due to unavoidable circumstances then if the previous school had just the base level of education and the new school has an intricate level of education; this will make difficult for the student to adapt the new environment as the new and advanced level of education. This will significantly hamper the grades of the student. Hence, this scenario also signifies the importance of keeping a same curriculum in the nation.
Further, on the contrary people will suggest that if a particular subject is offered in limited schools, then during the recruitment process or in higher education this will serve as an upper hand as only few will be knowing those subject in detail.
Obviously, there will be few who argues that a nation shouldn't follow the same curriculum until they enter college and the curriculum should differ from school to school while the rest will support the author's recommendation. Hence, this prompt is slighly more inclined towards the author's position afteer considering all the following reasons mentioned above. Still, the prompt is open for further arguments until then it's germane to keep the same curriculum until students enter college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, still, then, while, as to, for example, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12895377129 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70817019458 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493917274939 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.0009370764 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.533333333 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 5.21951772744 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327943702497 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112060240948 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852413634364 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182255048786 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129090824352 0.0667264976115 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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