Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Due to the advancement of technology ,students tend to learn everything by the aid of computer based programs such as Internet websites which are used commonly around the world.Thus,it plays an essential role to reveal an advanced level of reference settings.It is agreed that most people use it for a range of purposes like searching for beneficial materials and being familiar with latest developments.So,it is a simple tool to have such facilities, as I will illustrate in my treatise.
Firstly, connecting to the net is much more effective[than what...using more means you are comparing it to something] and it is a useful way to increase ones knowledge.For instance,when I want to have practice materials, I just look for them easily on the Internet. In addition,it has online practice tests which can enhance your ability to work out with any problems,which you can practice virtually. Therefore,it should be taken into account as a easier way to accomplish your hometasks on time.This means that is one of the simplest technique to solve issues in a relaxed way.
Secondly, it provides you with latest advancements which notify you to keep up with technological news and then you will be able to perform things correctly related to that message. For example,if I get news about modern cars how they are designed,when I do projects on modern cars, I can use this information to change the appearance of the vehicle I am designing. Thus,it is much more effective approach to innovation in the way you are trying to generate gadgets.So, it is assured that most people are always ready to get innovations through that way.
To recapitulate,the revolution of technology aids people get information faster as it is released very quickly. Thus,everyone will continue to use such technological devices as a rapid method to study all information. I believe that it will be an invaluable tool to learning everything.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13057324841 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28705158185 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589171974522 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.151861331 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.1 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221679334281 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796385482146 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366086353296 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125763155054 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270915305087 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.