Some people focus on news in their country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The speed of development in technology makes people easier to update news every time they surfing the internet. Some people mainly read domestic news. While others claim that we should take care of international news due to many reasons. From my point of view, each of these statements has pros and cons. In this essay I will both perspectives.
On one hand, local news is the news helps you know more about your home town. Knowing what occurs are happening at people local effect directly to their lives. Many aspects such as education, health care, finance and new regulations are the topics people really care about. For example, in Covid-19 pandemic, local news helps the citizens updating new cases in their area in order to have some crucial solution to avoid social infection. Additionally, domestic news brings more useful news to people due to the specific area it covers. The news that come from overseas is not always true. For instance, 5G stations response for infection of corona virus and people start to destroy these new station, which make some damage to local facilities.
On the other hand, international news acts an important role in the globalization area. The electronic journalism has the power to shrink the globe to a village. The international media brings the advance to people who are far from their relatives. For example, the virus pandemic effect overseas student due to chance to be ill, or new regulations about study online and more news that they need to take care about for their relatives. However, the field that receive the benefit the most is finance. Every second in trade market is critical for entrepreneurs' decisions which can enact the company. Moreover, media also helps the company know the requirements of customer to develop their products.
In conclusion, it is hard to decide which statement are more positive than the other. Both of them bring the key features to the readers in variety aspect of everyday life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... Some people mainly read domestic news. While others claim that we should take care o...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'bring'.
Suggestion: bring
...e to a village. The international media brings the advance to people who are far from ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97272727273 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54780014583 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9073731795 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1428571429 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319101996094 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893599026235 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699883023057 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182609242776 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665753253858 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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