The Government’s investment in Arts, Music and Theatre is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in Public Services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
A developed nation is known by equity provided by the government in every stream. It is believed that investment by government in the field of entertainment and culture is good-for-nothing, whereas, the same amount of money should be use on the public goods. I agree with the statement but cultural aspects cannot be overlooked in the terms of government’s spending.
Beyond any qualms, there are several compelling reasons why funds should be invested in public betterment because education plays very crucial role as educated citizens contribute a big chunk in growth of the country. Firstly, it boosts economic and social progress by supporting better literacy, income equity and increase gross domestic product of the nation. For instance, a survey done in UK last year shows that educated people get more opportunities in their life and tend to stay healthier than those who are not. Hence, education is an essential tool for everybody’s overall development.
Further reinforcing, there are myriad logical thoughts to support the same view because a healthy nation explicates overall wellbeing. Better healthcare services provide larger room for human development as it increase human life expectancy and reduce treatment burden for person and the government as well. That is to say, developed nations like USA, Canada provide best healthcare to its citizens so that they can ask for better productivity from its people. Therefore, government must invest funds in medical facilities.
On the contrary, other aspects can not be ignored as well. Not only public services but also entertainment and cultural aspects are crucial for human growth. Undoubtedly, entertainment removes mental stress and improve mental health which is quite problematic in recent times. For instance, a study of New York University shows that 1 out of 3 people are suffering from mental stress which causes depression. As a matter of fact, government must invest money on entertainment facilities or programs such as cinema halls, theatre, art gallery, cultural fair, food fests and many more so that people can meet and greet which will help in emotional and mental stability. Hence, it will promote creativity and passion to follow.
To recapitulate, promotion of education and maintenance of healthcare services are essential for nation’s growth, but facilities for entertainment are also important for healthy and productive environment in society. But will it be followed in future? Still stays a question.
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Suggestion: used
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Suggestion: Further,
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Suggestion: provide the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, on the contrary, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2114.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42051282051 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98680420224 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571794871795 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.893640378 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.7 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16642179964 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517205676747 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720602792619 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100595988953 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806625477767 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.