People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?
Recently, the issue of rapid increase on the human consumption of sweety drink has been receiving a great deal of public attention. While this problem is attributable to some reasons, some solution can be took in account to solve it.
There are some explaining why people are in favour of using sugar-based drinks. First, the advertisement usually use myriad of campion to promote their products that give consumer many appealing reasons to buy them. For example, since the target audience of soft drinks often are youngster so just by decorating adorably the cover of bottle and manufacturing some apatable flavour such as chocolate, strawberries and vany, the children will be easily swayed by these advertisements. Second, the drinks containing a ton of sugar give people a contented and satisfied feeling when they use them, which makes them want to consume more and more. In fact, nowadays the youth often award themselves a cup of milk tea or a bottle soft drink when they finish some tasks or they often order some sugary drinks when they hang out with their friends because sugar-based drinks considered as drinks for relaxing.
Some steps can be implemented by government and individuals to ease this problem. In terms of national and local authorities, a high tax on sweety drinks should be enforced as the best way to prevent this trend to continue rise. In fact, if the prices of soft drinks become significant higher, consumer will think twice when decide buy these or not because with this money they can spend for more meaningful purposes. From the perspective of person, everyone should aware the diverse impacts of consuming a huge amount of sugary drinks so that they will reduce their consumption. For illustrate, if humans know that these drinks can make them obesity, diabetes, heart diseases and the worst is cancer if they use an unimagine amount, they will concern for their health and decrease their requirements.
In conclusion, consuming more and more sugary drinks will have significant impacts for consumer so the government and individuals should do something instantly to solve this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10888252149 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69795081433 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56446991404 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9435554769 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.153846154 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364854971695 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129198754064 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728770355539 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220470052403 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065773954688 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.