Dear Sir,
I am a former student of yours and was in your class of 1983. You might not remember but you are my inspiration to become an English Teacher. I still remember your unique way of teaching and your kind behavior towards your students.
I am writing this letter in anticipation of a letter of reference from you. As I always wanted to become an English teacher, I have applied for the same post at ABC school and a letter of reference from you will heavily increase my chances to be hired for this job.
Also, you are one of the most respected and experienced teachers around here, it will be beneficial for my reputation. Moreover, I understand that we haven’t been in touch for a while; hence I have enclosed the copies of my achievements that I earned over the years, which will help you to jog your memory and will also help you to make your mind up.
I’d also request you to mention my enthusiasm towards becoming a teacher as well as my interest in the English language as I was always first to raise my hand to answer your question and was one of your favorites students.
Yours faithfully,
Sumit
- Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it causes problems. Do you agree or disagree? 84
- In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across arange of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. For today’s world, which system is appropriate? 73
- You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter.• Describe the problem with the equipment• Explain how this problem is affecting 73
- Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development? 84
- Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development? 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47804878049 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55086972372 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556097560976 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2471826244 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 4.34317383033 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360400780073 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163136128298 0.0766984524023 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792569678398 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214934096642 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975326328035 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.