Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good mem ers of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.
We all know that man is social animals and no one can exist on island. Some group of people asset that parents are only source that teach children how to be a good person, conflict this view othe believe that teachers are responsible to learn the values that make them good individual. I am totally agreed with the fact that, parents can teach them better how to be a good character.
We all aware about taht home is our first school as children learn first from their home. From child's born to preschool they learn all the things from their parents. For an example, how to speak as well as how to walk first time they learn from their parents. Parents should have to reach them good values like obedience, respect and not hit to others these are indispensable block to build a good character.
On the other hand, some proponents believe that school is place where they can learn good values. Some students follow teachers as their role model as because they obey them blindly. For instance, at school teacher learn them subject as well as how to behave with others. school is place where children meet with numerous people and they observe how other children behave.
To conclude this point, parents are first teachers of their child as they teach them good values that make them how to be a good person despite this view bunch of people says that school is best place to learn these values. As my opinion, family members or parents build good character of their child compare to school.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (othe) must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
... a good person, conflict this view othe believe that teachers are responsible to learn ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...them good values like obedience, respect and not hit to others these are indispen...
^^
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: School
...t as well as how to behave with others. school is place where children meet with numer...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...s view bunch of people says that school is best place to learn these values. As my opin...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, well, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63157894737 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10308695257 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488721804511 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3059774316 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7692307692 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34781317022 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133826108028 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955199493134 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23211252009 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549519272749 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (othe) must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
... a good person, conflict this view othe believe that teachers are responsible to learn ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...them good values like obedience, respect and not hit to others these are indispen...
^^
Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: School
...t as well as how to behave with others. school is place where children meet with numer...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...s view bunch of people says that school is best place to learn these values. As my opin...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, well, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63157894737 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10308695257 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488721804511 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3059774316 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7692307692 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34781317022 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133826108028 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955199493134 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23211252009 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549519272749 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.