Some people claim that the government should provide free healthcare. Other think that the government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and its better to invest those fund in education and culture.
What is your opinion?
Improving healthcare is one of the most important concerns these days and with time it is being more expensive. Some people believe that government should provide free healthcare for their citizen while others think that instead of funding for free medical, the government should allocate that amount on education and culture. I partially agree with above statement that government should take responsibility for people’s healthcare.
To begin with, there are several reasons as to why government should provide the free medical facility to their citizens. Firstly, medical facility is a basic necessity provided by many developed nations, and it should be provided by every country because people are paying taxes every year. For example, in this current situation of pandemic by corona virus, many people have lost their livelihoods. If they are infected by this COVID-19 virus, then how will they get a proper treatment without money. Who shall be responsible for any fatality? Secondly, healthcare expenses are inflating day by day while income levels of individuals are not increasing proportionately. In case of any medical emergency, people who are going through financial crisis will suffer the most.
However, medical healthcare is an important aspect, but the government should not neglect the education system and culture activities as well. The government should come up with a proper plan to fund proportionately in each sector in order to follow a holistic approach. Education is also imperative so that people are aware about their health, dietary patterns and they avoid sedentary lifestyles which can make them obese. Moreover, cultural activities also have their own merits because people should know about their history, as the world is going forward with the contemporary technology. It is important to know where our roots lie.
In conclusion, although medical facility is an important aspect to be taken care of by the government, but education and culture have their own benefits which the government should not neglect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich the government should not neglect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.421875 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79828176912 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565625 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2447769776 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305351560317 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094971720177 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901658077247 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19166793309 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081087428972 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.