There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more
important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Undoubtedly, music has gained a special place in every individual's life today. Without music, life would be so dull and boring just like fish without water. We are blessed with the choice of a variety of music genres be it traditional folk and classical songs or latest pop and rock music. Even though international music is gaining fame, in my opinion, traditional music has an upper hand with regards to importance in our lives and I will elucidate the same with examples in the forthcoming paragraphs.
First and foremost, music adds freshness and brings positivity in our mundane life. To elaborate more, it rejuvenates our day
and hence provides us a new perspective on any task in hand. Some people have added music as a passion whereas some have even made it their careers like musicians and singers. Additionally, music lightens our hyperactive mood and brings
calmness to our heart and soul. According to a recent survey conducted by Harvard University, the results revealed that people who had heart diseases showed a better response to medicine and treatment after listening to music daily for an hour. Hence music is vital for survival.
There is no denying the fact that in a diverse country like India where history is deep-rooted traditional music can be found
everywhere. For example, the west side Rajasthani folk music along with Ghoomer dance is soothing to eyes and ears and if we go down
south then we have classical music with Bharatnatyam and Kuchipudi dance. Moreover Northside we have a Bhangra dance form on the tunes of Punjabi folk music and east side we have classical Assamese music. Our rich cultural heritage reflects in traditional art music which is essential to be maintained as it represents an identity of the nation. Therefore, traditional
music has outdone international music as it reflects our country and helps us understand it better.
In conclusion, music is very much necessary in our life for bringing some spark and enlightening our mood after experiencing Monday
blues. I firmly believe that listening to catchy tunes of traditional music makes us feel connected to our country and also
helps us to glorify its history.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07479224377 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78151657049 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570637119114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1649538532 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.764705882 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403026093528 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154973214594 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730403949476 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16843184262 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096594235639 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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