*Teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.*
Some tutors believe that their are alots of benefits to teenage emmigrants of school. While some people argue for the overseas students. The advantages it brings are however , infinitesimal when compared with its disadvantages.
The premodominant reason is trouble to become familiar with unknown nation. Most probably, they would hesitate to communicate , it might be strenoused for them to learn foreign language. Coordinately , culture and custom of international people would be difficult for them to adopt. For instance, as the emmigration rate of pupils is escalating in canada, so most of the students are not getting jobs due to lack in conversation and unfamilarity with the foreign society consequently troubleful for them to survive there.
As in this ubiquitous technological world , it would be hard for foreign pupils to understand the concepts and techniques of the new syllabus. Whilst, the method of foreign teaching may creates confusion to them. Correspondingly, their study schedule would be disturbed due to big time zone difference in the guest country. They may not be able to cope with the stress and strain , so determinant of it is suicides and depression. To illustrate, the suicide rates of students are surging up globally due to the over load of studies , so the above mentioned are the major causes of it.
To conclude, the stringent laws should be set for foreign students otherwise, this mushroomed emmigrants face poverty , lack of guidance and above mentioned problems. Thereupon, it is reiterate that its cons outstrips the pros.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33064516129 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08870771363 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584677419355 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3024062442 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217080059598 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694781375895 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387893476421 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129200798623 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00402914741108 0.056905535591 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.