Learning is primarily a matter of personal discipline; students cannot be motivated by school or college alone.
Learning of any sorts helps in the growth of personality.Learning is not always related to academics it can be any sort of learning i.e sports , art or just observing things in day to day life. To learn something thoroughly , the student should develop a keen interest otherwise it would just be superficial or just to get the job done.I agree with the author to some extent that learning anything is a matter of personal discipline , as without proper discipline a person would never genuinely learn anything and will try to find ways to avoid learning.
Firstly, a student’s life is surrounded by exams. His motivation or requirement for learning is mainly in order to give some exams . The more he learns the more he scores, but this learning is ephemeral. As after a few years or even few months the student will forget things which he just barely mugged to pass exams .On the contrary when a student learns something out of interest for a particular subject matter , that knowledge will remain in his mind for a longer time .For instance , when a student is about the World War for academic purposes he finds some personalities interesting and does some research about it . The possibility of him remembering his research is more than the mugged up answers for the exam.
Secondly,when a person attends school or college there are various other activities happening in college apart from academics.These extra curricular activities are not mandatory for each student but surely helps them in building their personality.Students who are interesting in learning these new things pursue it on their own without the compulsion of any professor.While attending college or school student also participate in various activities on their own ,which they learn completely on for pursuing their own interest. This learning is based on an individual basis and not supported by some school or college.
However, there are some rudimentary subjects which are taught to students only in schools. Its when they learn this subjects in school they go on to pursue them in great depths. For learning these subjects the student need not have any personal discipline as these subjects are common and required for everyone. For instance, in order to study subjects like history,geography and mathematics a student need not have any personal discipline as such because he/she has to study this subjects in order to grow in life,
In conclusion , I would like to say that learning anything depends on the interest of the student . If the student really wants to learn something he should pursue it irrespective of the fact that it is included in his academic curriculum.Learning happens when a student is motivated for it and not forced to learn a particular thing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2315.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 456.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07675438596 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04370902737 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47149122807 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.048513746 60.3974514979 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.357142857 118.986275619 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5714285714 23.4991977007 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 5.21951772744 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307456050073 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112193650269 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578399436806 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184409615661 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038805713848 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 14.1392134831 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.8971910112 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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