some peoples are of the opine that women should play an equal role in police or military forces like the army other believe that this work is unsuitable for women discuss both view and give your opinion .
Gone are the days when women had not indulged in police and army professions.This attitude has gone under sea changes ever since the technology took place. A section of society assert that female should contribute crucial role in police military field where as, other adhere it is not perfect for them.This essay shall elucidate both the views along with my slant in ensuing segments.
First and foremost, reason why a female should equally contribute in these professions that women can join in various posts such as medical, nursing, doctor which is necessary post in army and some other forces.To be more precise, they can contribute in these services during the war period in 1999 kargil war for instance, it was between the Pakistan and India, where women had given precious support with their help to take care wounded soldiers, It had great help to recover their worst condition.Thus, if the women contribute in these professions and it would helpful for nation. furthermore, owing to spread of education females are able to crack numerous level examination which was not possible in past time.To be more precise, learning freedom make them more strong and give them more choice to choose their future in these field. By learning women become more aware to choose these profession in present time. Girls are opting profession as officer in various forces. For instance in India BSF (border security force) enrolled 10,000 women significant post. Hence, woman should need to join these career which improve their living standard and helpful for their own and nation growth as well.
However, a section of society reckon, it is not a suitable profession for ladies firstly, army and police force need 24 hour attention in job. which is necessary condition of this job where as it is not possible by women to present their services in 364 days as they are also have responsibility to take care their family children. If they will play attention on their duty on 24 hours then it is possible they definitely ignore their family responsibility which is harmful not only families but also in society. Moreover, in these jobs there is not on fixed place duty transfer is crucial part of these job. By transforming it is not possible to move with the whole family as their children faced difficulty in study as as well as a likeness of emotion support from their mother side. Nevertheless, they are some other possible profession which need only 8 hours attention . By this, they can take care their family and they can earn better as army and police job after some as period it is difficult to continue give their services. Consequently, it is not easy to work continue on these posts.
To recapitulate, after discussing the both views i vehemently voch that although, in this advanced century women are equal to do same job like wise men.they should join army, police, navy yet there are some hurdles in their way.according to my slant , women should make their mind. if they are able to manage both family and job then definitely they should join these career option otherwise there are so many other options they can adopt.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2600.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 530.0 315.596192385 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90566037736 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53575539074 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488679245283 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 827.1 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.446546812 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.444444444 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4444444444 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224402233928 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719095767684 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578240771192 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15257127042 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360586985158 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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