some people think that increasing business and cultural contact between countries bring many positive affect other says it cause loss of the nation identity is discussed both the view and give your opinion.
International business has taken mammoth demensions eversince technology comes in limelight. to my mind ,improving trade with international level and culture connection bring positive influence rather than negative .this essay elucidates both the prospective a along with my slant in the ensuing segments .
First in the foremost ,globalization brings various positive outcomes such as improvement in trade which is precious for the nation's growth .To illustrate ,every nation has not perfect to produce every products. owing to exchange of the production they made strong relations with each other and also able to complete their necessity .For example Arab countries are rich in mineral such as petrol .where as other countries like india has a huge production of grain.owing to this business both countries are able to fulfil their demands .by this they establish wise relation between each other
Hence it has a positive influence on the both nation .
However, owing to this ,it might be reduced the national identity such as spaghetti and pasta which are famous dishes of italy .nowadays this is easily available every street of corner. Nevertheless ,it reduced the cultural barrious. Not only this, it creates the more popularity about the nation, but also reduce the hurdle of cultural contact and it is helpful to become a world as a global village .
To recapitulate,although there are a few weak points to increase business with other nations ,yet it has a numerous benefit, which are necessary for the holistic growth of nation as well as the word. according to my prospective increasing business and culture contact gives a positive inference on the all nations .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, nevertheless, so, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30337078652 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91379763135 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.836409799 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.333333333 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247488081022 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100853859182 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067448993338 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143700852142 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559645149983 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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