some people prefer to engage in lifestyle and activities in colder climates other prefer a hotter environment discuss both views and give your opinion .
It is ubqutiously know that revolution of earth make summer and winter season.Some section of society reckon that winter season is better to indulge their work out and lifestyle whereas other seems differently.This essay shall elucidate the both view along with my slant an ensuing segments.
First and the foremost,reason why do people fascinated with chilly weather that they feel comfortable in a colder season with the peaceful and relex environment.To be more precise,the masses does not shed a sweat and they also escape from harmful sunrays which is a great cause of many skin disease.As the scientists research shown that sun rays specially at midday time are very harsh.Not only damage the skin but also badly affected on the eyesight.Hence winter has not such type of harm. Secondly,owing to this,masses can enjoy various delicious food and they also can wear stylish cloth such as jacket long court shoes so on.it is conect them more up to date with fashion and trend and variety of food make them strong physically as well as mentally.Consequesly they easily maintained their physical balance in winter days with the help of good food and work out.
However, hot season has also numerous pros.Firstly, long hours of the days provide the facility to spend more hours on work that is useful for the growth of the country.As more hours showroom open then more people can spend more time on shopping for these activities definitely help to groom the economy of nation.Moreover some vegetable and crops need hot climate for prepare their final stage likewise wheat need extreme high temperature before the harvest.It is necessary for the growth of production.Lastly summer climate give more opportunity to do the outdoor activities such as games and picnic which is helpful to shade the weight and for more entertainment .
To recapitulate, I vehemtly voch that although maturity of masses like winter season for their positive outcomes yet,summer has also essential for some purpose.In my opinion both seasons have different importance both are crucial as per their surplus benefit .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17404129794 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94204913558 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607669616519 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.305860568 49.4020404114 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 350.8 106.682146367 329% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.8 20.7667163134 326% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.4 7.06120827912 431% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0945495511781 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496927432504 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307403795699 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597272874835 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243449485054 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.8 13.0946893788 281% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.47 50.2224549098 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.89 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.87 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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