Even though globalization affects the world's economics in a very positive way, its positive side should not be forgotten. Discuss?
It is believed that the globalization is boosting up the world's economy and contains some flaws also. In my opinion, the advantages outnumbered the disadvantages in the context of globalization.
Firstly, In globalization, international companies invest all around the world which leads to creating a plethora of jobs. Moreover, globalization helps the countries to exchange umpteen of technologies in various sectors, this helps to grow the countries in every aspect. In addition to that, countries are swapping their culture with each other which results in the understanding, significance of an individual nation's history that make a peaceful world. These factors help the world's economy to grow in the countries which could make the world a place better to live with great technologies that help to build a great infrastructure.
Whereas, I came across the only disadvantage of globalization over economic growth. However, people are fascinated more with international products instead of small scale indigenous industries. Therefore, they don't earn a decent amount of profit and reduce the production of various products due to less demand. So, we should even try local products also to support small scale industries which are also an integral part of the economy. Because there are several taxes regarding the import of different things. In the end, if sales of local products where governments don't need to pay taxes.
In conclusion, globalization is an amazing step towards the betterment of society. People and governments should encourage more international companies to invest in various parts of the world. It is believed that the globalization is boosting up the world's economy and contains some flaws also. In my opinion, the advantages outnumbered the disadvantages in the context of globalization.
Firstly, In globalization, international companies invest all around the world which leads to creating a plethora of jobs. Moreover, globalization helps the countries to exchange umpteen of technologies in various sectors, this helps to grow the countries in every aspect. In addition to that, countries are swapping their culture with each other which results in the understanding, significance of an individual nation's history that make a peaceful world. Furthermore, these factors help the world's economy to grow in the countries which could make the world a place better to live with great technologies that help to build a great infrastructure.
Whereas, I came across the only disadvantage of globalization over economic growth. However, people are fascinated more with international products instead of small scale indigenous industries. Therefore, they don't earn a decent amount of profit and reduce the production of various products due to less demand. So, we should even try local products also to support small scale industries which are also an integral part of the economy. Because there are several taxes regarding the import of different things. In the end, if sales of local products where governments don't need to pay taxes.
In conclusion, globalization is an amazing step towards the betterment of society. People and governments should encourage more international companies to invest in various parts of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 41.998997996 200% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2768.0 1615.20841683 171% => OK
No of words: 503.0 315.596192385 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50298210736 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17505922324 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.294234592445 0.561755894193 52% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 847.8 506.74238477 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6672778433 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9642857143 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 8.67935871743 253% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101714340719 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034583172648 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311764875113 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675225857069 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192999114267 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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