People can live and work anywhere they want to choose because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?
Owing to technological advances such as digital products and transportation, people can choose the area that they prefer to stay or work. Although there are some drawbacks associated with inhabiting and working at their favourite place, I believe that the benefits outweigh the negatives (mpacts.
There are several drawbacks to living and working from a distance due to technological progress. Human interpersonal relationships for example, text message and email are the most used method of communication. But a lot of emotions are beyond words, also emotions cannot be felt properly by only reading words. Therefore, people may lose their ability to communicate face to face or express their true emotions due to relying so heavily on communication technology, it may lead to destroying interactions between individuals. In addition, public transport always has some unpredictable factors that may make people late for work. For instance, trains or high speed rails may be delayed or actually stop running because of signal failure, mechanical failure, or weather problems that would influence people’s schedules.
However, I would argue that inhabiting and working at the place they fancy has more positive impacts. Firstly, many people are not satisfied with their job because of the working environment, company’s atmosphere or they cannot get along with their colleagues. All these factors may affect an individual’s performance at work. If people are able to work at the place that makes them feel comfortable, they may find it more relaxing, less stressful and probably achieve a better result than working in an office. Secondly, many people prefer to live in the suburbs rather than cities due to it being more peaceful and quiet, not as crowded and far less air pollution. Thanks to high quality transport systems, they no longer have to live in a certain place because its close to where they work.
In conclusion, I believe that the benefits of residing in and working from an area they like outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93165381361 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6021323781 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25663140589 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870214510874 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589844076482 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155574882965 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380720057441 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.