An increading numbet of professional such as doctor and teachers are leaving their countries to work develope countries.what problem does cause?what solutions can do suggest to deal with this situations
In this fast paced era brain drain had becomr a intrigued contraversial trends that expert such aswhite collers workers are migrate from native land ti wealthy nation.In the following paragraph i would elucidate reason behind problems anf also propose some paramount solutions.
To commence with pressing problem,first and foremost is stangnant of salary and gruelling schedule by an organization.seco dly most of experts such as teachers doctors and may be fresher and unemployee due to scarce of vacancy in particular domain.
Futhermore,authoritu doesnt allot high level facilities such as givernment hopitals and vocational techniques as well as education.thus the masses of people improverished nations will be uneducated and less expert in particular field.
Another formidable factor,that territory educated youth tend to go to overseas countries due to mammoth problem of capital,therefore GDS of underdeveloped nation will be risky because of intelligentsia and manufacturer abandon their home land.hence jeopardize the future of new generation.
So,to mitigated some nasty consequences firsyly givernment will provide vacational as well as financial facilties to people.secondly also allocated jobs to educated youth,Thus unemployment could decrease.
To recapitulate,the govetnment will put teir best foot forward step for burgeoning nation by setting up some protocols to curb the menace of poor nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97549019608 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55736141844 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.754901960784 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6998054944 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 203.166666667 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.3333333333 7.06120827912 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0935016198477 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418679503841 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416191176349 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418679503841 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416191176349 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.0946893788 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 50.2224549098 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.0 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.06 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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