Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friendship and making friends are always the one of the most important things among people in this well-developed society. Without good friends, it will be tough for people to survive in this society no matter what aspect. However, different people will treat each other differently because they have a different status in one’s heart and mind. depend on the statues, people will be treated differently in different situations; therefore, some people may express that the ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over long period of time is mroe important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. As long as I am concerned, both abilities are of the same importance.
In this society, a good friend who is really caring and can bear the risk for you is hard to find. As time goes on, people’s cognition of the world is gradually completing. when facing a cruel and deceptive world, people are self-restricted to give oneself integrally to another. This condition makes a good friendship to become more precious and even hard to obtain, so people ought to have the ability to maintain the friendship they have. In this way, people will keep friends who are really caring about them easily. Because of the well understanding among each other on mood, mind, and hobby; people will truly get the happiness from this.
On the other hand, the ability to make new friends easily is also substantial. In one’s life, it is difficult to stay in one place without changing, because people will always develop unstoppably and need to advance towards a higher level, which means they will change and live into a new place at the same time. Besides, the more friends you make, they more ways you get to solve a problem. In the new environment where people are distant from their old friends, they need some new friends in order to survive more easily and successfully no matter what condition it is. In another word, to obtain the pleasure and happiness in a new condition, people need to make new friends. In this way, they will have an external reliance when they encounter problems or difficulties, or they get a way to express their mood when they are frustrated. For instance, when I left my home country to access a better education in the U.S., it is my first time to totally get away from my best friends who still lived in my fatherland. Also, it is my first time to feel what lonely is. Because I do not have any friend their, my life become boring, and the only thing left are study, loneliness, and miss. Nonetheless, everything changes after I make my first group of friends in school. Because of their help, I have never fallen into the difficulties anymore. because of their care, I do not feel lonely anymore.
In summary, someone might say that it is improtant to have ability of maintain friendship in a group of people, and others would tell that make new friends easily is important for happiness; however, in my opinion, they are as important as each other. Just as the beautiful rose with its green leaves, the loss of either part will possibly make its beauty incomplete. the same is true with these two ability, because people need to have long-lasting friendships to give them the warmth on heart, and they also need to make new friends at the same time in order to obtain the new happiness when they move into different places in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Depend
...fferent status in one’s heart and mind. depend on the statues, people will be treated ...
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Line 1, column 510, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...he ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over long period of time is mroe...
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Line 1, column 545, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...with a small number of people over long period of time is mroe important for happiness than th...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...n of the world is gradually completing. when facing a cruel and deceptive world, peo...
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Line 5, column 680, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ition, people need to make new friends. In this way, they will have an external re...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...r fallen into the difficulties anymore. because of their care, I do not feel lonely any...
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Line 7, column 369, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ll possibly make its beauty incomplete. the same is true with these two ability, be...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, really, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in summary, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2818.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 595.0 407.700716846 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73613445378 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93888872473 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5513213974 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440336134454 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 872.1 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9149973018 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8846153846 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65384615385 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316761664355 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093514167425 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928246141914 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220609860086 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677872285992 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Depend
...fferent status in one’s heart and mind. depend on the statues, people will be treated ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 510, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...he ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over long period of time is mroe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 545, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...with a small number of people over long period of time is mroe important for happiness than th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...n of the world is gradually completing. when facing a cruel and deceptive world, peo...
^^^^
Line 5, column 680, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ition, people need to make new friends. In this way, they will have an external re...
^^
Line 5, column 1346, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...r fallen into the difficulties anymore. because of their care, I do not feel lonely any...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 369, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ll possibly make its beauty incomplete. the same is true with these two ability, be...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, really, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in summary, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2818.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 595.0 407.700716846 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73613445378 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93888872473 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5513213974 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440336134454 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 872.1 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9149973018 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8846153846 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65384615385 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316761664355 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093514167425 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928246141914 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220609860086 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677872285992 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.