Task 2:Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas. Others think that people should have the freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that new homes should be designed in the style of old houses in the local areas, as opposed to being able to freely build houses in their own style. In my opinion, I believe that building houses like other local houses will bring more benefits to the people living there.
On the one hand, the houses with different designs from other houses in the same residential area will make the whole area more joyful and artistic. The houses built by owners not only give the residential area a new look but also show the owner's personality. For example, owners can paint the walls of their building whatever they like their colour, wallpaper or art, not only that they can show their neighbours their personality. them and easily make friends with the people who live there and make their home the most unique and beautiful home.
On the other hand, the community-like home design in that area could protect the owners from thieves and dangers. When the houses look alike will raise a sense of community, there is no distinction between rich and poor when they live in the same house type when viewed from the outside. Moreover, people living here do not have to worry about crime, because thieves cannot distinguish which house is rich to rob, so people can safely live without having to think about the crime that will come to them.
In conclusion, although many people want to design a home to express their personality, I strongly believe that building a house like any other in the neighbourhood will bring more benefits. for the homeowner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: unique
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52768729642 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25761804204 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465798045603 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0421302925 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.444444444 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1111111111 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38979746985 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18774025216 0.084324248473 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149504080078 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274445794317 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159486601833 0.056905535591 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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