You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Amanda,
I hope you are keeping well. I would like to share a about recent Areoplane massive crash that occured in our country. This tragidy turned everyone's attention locally and internationally. Since the plane was arrived with 174 passengers from Dubai to India.
The incident took place in Kerala International Airport around 12:00 AM midnight, as the major cause of the incident was refered due to bad weather condition and the pilot could not control the mishap. Many travelers including on-flight and their relatives across the world were scared by hearing this news. Although, airlines authority had confirmed that there is not injuries to any onboarded travellers, relatives will not resist untill they see the loved one reaching home.
On this circumstance, I am unable to digest the news as my dearest friend is also part of this unexpected crash. We both were planned to go together due to emergency, I could not able to go along with him.
God forbidden nothing happen to people on the plane and I am happy to hear because major loss of people is saved.
Thank you,
Ganesh Prakasam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Amanda, I hope you are keeping well. I would lik...
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Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...are keeping well. I would like to share a about recent Areoplane massive crash th...
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Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... attention locally and internationally. Since the plane was arrived with 174 passenge...
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Line 4, column 479, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l they see the loved one reaching home. On this circumstance, I am unable to dig...
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Line 6, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I could not able to go along with him. God forbidden nothing happen to people o...
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Line 8, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... because major loss of people is saved. Thank you, Ganesh Prakasam
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss of people is saved. Thank you, Ganesh Prakasam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00537634409 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61984674125 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.720430107527 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5731960231 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6363636364 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961281392465 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352690222043 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337211379923 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463846292303 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224580165498 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.