Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. you would like to do some work at the hospital in your fre time.
write a letter tot he hospital. in your letter
Explain why would you like to do unpaid work at the hospital
say what type of work you would be able to do
give details of when you would be available for this work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you in reference to your advertisement regarding the help required at the hospital. I would like to dedicate some of my free time to work at the hospital.
The staff at the Ghram Hospital treats their patients utmost care and professionalism. Last year my on was admitted to there as he was in an accident and the they were so courteous and helpful during the whole length of our stay. I want our community to be aware of the good work done by your hospital.
I work as a marketing manager in the healthcare industry and I want to offer my expertise pro-bono to help promote the services and offerings. I can help create communication and run advertisements on your digital platforms targeting the right audience.
I am available to work over the weekend and on every other Monday from the start of the next month. You can write to me on karishma01@gmail.com to let me know if thees days are favourable for the staff as I will need some assistance from them for the job.
Look forward to your reply
Your faithfully
Karishma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'they'?
Suggestion: the; they
...d to there as he was in an accident and the they were so courteous and helpful during th...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lp promote the services and offerings. I can help create communication and run a...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...forms targeting the right audience. I am available to work over the weekend a...
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Line 11, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the job. Look forward to your reply Your faithfully Karishma
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Line 13, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orward to your reply Your faithfully Karishma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63020833333 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95979552333 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4536592698 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318745088998 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113457433044 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702497536954 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153919087052 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965997800554 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.