Task 2:Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, while others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
People have different views about the necessity of funding cultural activities, while some people think that it is unnecessary, others believe that supporting the cultural will bring more benefit to the citizens and the culture. In my opinion, I strongly believe that invest in cultural is a good choice for the population.
On the one hand, many people opposed investing in cultural activities, they think that the government have many things to slove which is much important than art. For example, the deterioration of transport infrastructure in many cities, investing in roads or brides and make these be more modern and safe which will make the country have a comprehensive development. Not only develop the country but also make the citizens feel more comfortable. There is no point in spending money on cultural before the safety of people who live here.
On the other hand, it is cannot deny that art and cultural activities are a part of residents’ life. When the government spending money for the culture and develop its, people will have more thing to do such as to cope with stress, earn a bunch of money from the tourists. Each country has its own characteristics, events in a different time or seasons in a year, occasions that associated with celebrities, therefore, tourists come from all over the world can play, enjoy events and spend money for things that the local people sell such as handmade products or traditional clothes. The more government spending in cultural, the more benefits will come to the country and citizens.
Although many people think that investing in cultural is no necessary, I strongly believe that supporting art and cultures is a good choice for government funding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s a good choice for government funding.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9925093633 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72830953833 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516853932584 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.701084801 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.3 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331913782909 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144652113868 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102466494314 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24443014024 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964741875684 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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