Some people feel that once they go overseas they have to follow the new culture and forget about their traditional culture. State your view.
Customs and traditions are the skeleton of any culture. Migration obviously leads to the challenge of choice to prefer newer norms over household ones which people often debate. This essay discusses both perspectives and comes to a conclusion.
At the outset, acculturation has inevitably invaded since colonial periods. In the modern world, many prefer to settle in developed countries citing arguably improved living standards. Cultural shock is an initial commonality to this bunch, however over the years, foreign habits eventually pervades the settlers in hopes of societal acceptance. To reminisce a strong example, dating culture is well prevalent among Indian students abroad, which is strictly considered in some Indian communities. With successive generations, certain indigenous practices are being steadily sieved out by their international peers .
On a deeper study, we get our lessons from parents and our society. The ideas and values instigated in an individual regionally, possesses a linear correlation with the respect they uphold. For instance, treating teachers and guests with at most respect is a commonly found ancient Indian teaching. It is no wonder that an teachers are amongst the highly respected groups in Indian communities, with their very own day of celebration. Meanwhile, festivals and holidays paint a unique picture of a nation’s background, and portray a lovely splendour of one’s ethnicity. Loosing this uniqueness might not be a worthwhile effort considering nobody is perfect.
To conclude, this essay agrees with the necessity of cultural preservation of any country men residing in any part of the world apart from their home, because nothing can change the fact that any immigrant is always a representative of a nation’s pride and honour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... sieved out by their international peers . On a deeper study, we get our lesson...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... Indian teaching. It is no wonder that an teachers are amongst the highly respect...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an teacher' or simply 'teachers'?
Suggestion: an teacher; teachers
... Indian teaching. It is no wonder that an teachers are amongst the highly respected groups...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, while, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57299270073 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9864841542 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689781021898 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1653266709 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954337342688 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251248887918 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026557403423 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522139732342 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175978457088 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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