Traffic congestion is a serious problem in many countries around the world. Describe the situation in your home country and suggest some solutions.
Nowadays, since cities are continuing to grow, especially in developing countries such as Vietnam and some Southeast Asia countries, their streets are becoming extremely congested. This essay will look at the reasons and propose some measures.
One of the major causes of traffic congestion is simply a lack of space. Because most of the streets are narrow, which were constructed in the last few decades, used to contain mainly bicycles, motorbikes, and a few cars, it has no room for new roads to handle the rapid growth of transport means. This problem could be addressed by investing in satellite cities which close to the central city with many modern traffic facilities and new wide roads. Simultaneously, the government should create more new jobs to engage fresh graduates moving to new cities that might be to reduce the overcrowded situations in the center.
Another factor of a traffic jam is the rising wealth of city dwellers. Purchasing a car seems to be a popular way to show off one's prosperity. Many cars in which middle-class people are affordable appear to increase gradually despite it is surely unable to widen the roads. Up to now, cars have begun to swallow the space that just used to accommodate many smaller forms of transportation. The forward way might be to stimulate new citizens turning to use public transportation instead of private cars.
In conclusion, while economic growth and population increase have led to massive matters with traffic, some practical solutions mentioned above should be taken with the view to improve the situation. It is more important to build up modern public transport systems than to destroy long time roads which may relate to historical sites and unique architectural structures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15044247788 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78694096934 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622418879056 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5313470246 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111231916805 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354502743547 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336127425174 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683316587155 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216606244872 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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