It is widely accepted that we are all under huge pressure due to a more complex atmosphere of modern life. Despite of all convenient facilities and services, we also encounter a plenty of tasks, which need us rigorously plan and organize. Personally, I am of a storng opinion that youths need to have the ability to plan and organize their own modern life. I feel this way for several reasons and will explore them in the following essay.
First of all, as modern life is getting more complex than it was in the past, all things that need to be handled also increase dramatically. In addition, all decisions should be made quickly and precisely. This situation could only be achieved when young people practice a lot. It is said that most actions we take depend on our habits. By experiences, we are able to determine the effects brought by each decision and eventually decide how to solve problems in a short time.
Another point I would like to issue is that young people nowadays have abundent choices. This means that we can survey a lot of things in different domains. As a result, we are capable of elicitate which direction is our favorite one. The prerequisite is that, however, we have enough time to survey. Consequently, it is necessary for every young person to have good plan and organization of his or her life.
Last but not least, young people need to find out their own tempo. A rapid speed of life may make us anxious and frustrated, especially when we are not really know what do we want. By causiously plan and organize our time, we can take a deep breath when we get tired; and then when we are ready and full of energy, we will take advantures again. Living with one's comfortable tempo help us keep healthy, both physically and mentally.
In conclusion, we are all living in this fast-paced world. All we need to do is to try as hard as we can to find out what kinds of lives would we desire. As environment is getting more and more complex than it was before, we young people should learn through the process of planning and organizing our lives to dig out the true interests of themselves and make up their minds. Therefore, we will never fall and miss our directions and can embrace our happiness the most.
- TPO 40 Integrated Writing Task 70
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- TPO 43 Independent Writing TaskImagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion which of the following is the best thing to do Interrupt and correct the mistake right away Wai 70
- TPO 48 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Parents are the best teachers Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58208955224 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54891504308 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.298602587 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7272727273 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155902313595 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528832870155 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574933795457 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104066506014 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477555904508 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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