You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
* describe the situation
* explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
* say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring it to your attention, the kind of problems i am facing at the college accommodation. Please allow me to elaborate.
I have been staying with John for the past two months in Block A, room number 17. For the last few weeks, it has been very difficult for me to focus on studies and day-to-day activities due to various reasons such as long nights with lights switched on, which disturbs my sleep cycles and group activities during weekends with his friends in our room, which does not go well with my study time.
As John and myself are from different engineering streams, and his department having class hours starting lately than mine, he stays very late in the night for studying. As my classes starts much earlier, i prefer not to stay awake much longer. The different bed times, because of differing timings, is affecting both of us similarly. Also, he used to have group study with his classmates during weekends, which also disturbs my focus on studies.
This can be avoided, if you can provide me an accommodation with a student of my class at the earliest.
Looking forward for your positive reply.
Your's sincerely,
Anand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to your attention, the kind of problems i am facing at the college accommodation....
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ing. As my classes starts much earlier, i prefer not to stay awake much longer. T...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...s can be avoided, if you can provide me an accommodation with a student of my class at the earli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, similarly, so, well, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79411764706 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5455859226 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676470588235 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1696638893 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217925507516 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685992826665 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733459588379 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116265898383 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712495865324 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.