As global trade increases between different countries, many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Such goods are usually transported a long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks?
As a result of growing global trade among various nations, several daily essential things are being produced in other nations, and these products often travel to a long distance to reach in a local market. In my opinion, this altering business practices have both advantages and disadvantages to people as well as the nation.
To begin with the positives, the prime benefit of this international trade is that there are numerous products available in the market with a lower price for people to choose from. In other words, importing products from other countries have planted a great competition between the different vendors, and due to this competition, the single seller can not dominate the market and offer products on inappropriate rates, as usual, hence most of the necessary goods are available in a reasonable price. Furthermore, the quality of many products has increased drastically as local vendors try to attract customers by offering high standard products in order to create their customer base.
On the other hand, there are a few drawbacks to this development. Firstly, local artisans and merchandises are being vanished as a consequence of foreign trade because imported products are usually cheap and have the same quality as local ones, so, customers often choose goods, which are imported over locally-produced ones, as former is more convenient and economical. As a result, several local vendors lose their customers and end up getting their business shut. Secondly, these advancements have escalated consumerism, as easy access to low-cost products has promoted the use and throw culture among people, which in-turns have an adverse impact on the environment.
In conclusion, affordable prices and high quality, are the main advantages of transnational trade, it seems to have few untoward repercussions such as, diminishing local businesses and damaging our planet by endorsing the trend of consumerism.
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...by endorsing the trend of consumerism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, as for, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41584158416 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95036214732 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.0494149251 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.1 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.8 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188519137909 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070928293948 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059075001153 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105332891806 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442318731484 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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