An increasing number of people are now using the Internet to meet new people and socialize Some people think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming isolated

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An increasing number of people are now using the Internet to meet new people and socialize. Some people think this has brought people closer together, while others think people are becoming isolated

Over the recent decades, the influence of the Internet on human life is undeniable. Some people hold the view that the cyber world, whereas others think that it has limited the real-life interactions among people. From my perspective, the Internet has done more good than harm.
There are several reasons why many people assume that the development of the Internet is making users become more separated from reality and other people. To begin, there is common belief that spending too much time using the Internet is likely to kill face-to-face communication. Nowadays, we have all seen the couples sitting together in a restaurant ignoring each other and engaging with their smartphones instead. Moreover, many teenagers prefer making friends online to mixing with their peers in the real world. Virtual relationships are definitely not a healthy substitute for real-life interactions. Due to these drawbacks of cyber world, it is comprehensive that many people hold prejudiced views towards the Internet.
On the other hand, I support the view that the Internet has the own benefits. It would be difficult for people from different countries to maintain the cooperation without the Internet. Nowadays, interactions by email, phone or video are almost as good as face-to-face meetings, and many of us benefit from these interactions, either in work or social contexts. During the pandemic, almost all employees have been asked to work from home and Internet has become more important than ever. Thanks to some applications such as Zoom, Google Meet or Google Drive, work or study become easier and more convenient even though people cannot go to works and schools. Therefore, it is obvious that Internet is an inseparable part of our lives.
In conclusion, online network brings both advantages and disadvantages to human life. However, I believe that the Internet can be more beneficial if users know how to take advantage of it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2347266881 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81031514185 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591639871383 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1926510559 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7647058824 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235958836134 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691503875869 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697545293853 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132410489065 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679926322517 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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