You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter.
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain how this problem is affecting your work
• Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir\Madam,
I am writing this letter to report an issue with my personal computer, which i have purchased from you around two months ago. Although this machine has been functioning perfectly since day one, and i did not face any issue in its performance until the last night when it was restarted all of sudden when i was working on my official assignment.
Further, while i have tried all the initial diagnoses given on the booklet provided with this device, i have also contacted your customer, and the complaint has been registered, but no one contacted me yet. This computer is extremely important for me as i was using it for my office work, and now since it is not booting, i could not perform any pending task since yesterday. Moreover, it is the month-end so there are so many pending office works, which requires immediate action, else it would turn into a disaster.
I request you to please align a technician today on a priority basis to get this diagnosed.
Appreciate your prompt action on this matter. Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully.
Harpreet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...unctioning perfectly since day one, and i did not face any issue in its performan...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hen it was restarted all of sudden when i was working on my official assignment. ...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...mputer is extremely important for me as i was using it for my office work, and no...
^
Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... work, and now since it is not booting, i could not perform any pending task sinc...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85483870968 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66003011327 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3445118517 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.875 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203390481038 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917168402114 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516421502075 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113533879669 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322537274857 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.